Traduko - Brazil-portugala-Germana - Quero um grande amor. Moro a cerca de 30 km de...

La 4^ frase è un po' strana, non saprei come tradurrlo

Xini, could you please tell us why you think it is wrong?

CC: Xini

I already opened a discussion on the other part (bra port translation) and CCed you .

Oh, I didnt understand why you consulted me for a Brazilian text anyway
But still - why do you think it's wrong. Is any (of the understandable) sentence(s) obviously wrong?

yes because it was translated from the brazilian version (or using the brasilian version as reference)...

Ich beobachte die offene und penetrante "Allaria".

the meaning of some sentences in the translated text is not the same as those in the original text:
1)abito a circa 30 km da Milano, dove mi reco dal lunedì al venerdì per lavoro = Ich wohne ca. 30 km von Mailand entfernt, wo ich von Montag bis Freitag arbeite.
2)in the original text there aren't the sentences "Ich hoffe, dich kennenzulernen, nicht nur durch Schreiben" and "Ich beobachte die offene und penetrante Allaria"
3) sguardo penetrante = durchdrigender Blick
3) all'aria aperta = im Freien

Es gibt einige Sätze, die nicht gut übersetzt wurden.

fejl i ordstilling

Essa traducao esta correta para mim.

schtybi,

quando você acha, que a tradução estiver certa, porque votou "errado"?

Por favor muda o seu voto

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schtybi said, that the translation should be right in his eyes.
But the vote from him is "wrong" - why?

Heidrun, if edits have been done, you may want to reset the poll.

Yep, I just wasn't there for the last week, so I couldnt do it earlier.