תרגום - דנית-אנגלית - ja jeg vil gerne giftes igen jeg vil vente pÃ¥ dig...

I believe is correct. "Jeg vil gerne" can mean "I would like to" but also "I would gladly" (if I am not wrong) depends on the text. Thou, you should change "merry" with "marry"....

Yes I would love to marry you again, I will wait for you and kiss you forever. Your baby darling

"marry", and then my advice was also to follow the danish sentence which is: 'Yes, I would love to get married again...'

Yes, i'd like to be married again, I'll wait for you, and kiss you. Always your love.

Ah yes, good catch. The absence of comma made confused. Thank you.

The last words in the Danish version are confusing and incorrect formulated, it's missing somewhere a comma. Anyway only the first part of the translation seem to be correct.