Cucumis - Dịch vụ phiên dịch miễn phí trực tuyến
. .



Dịch - Swedish-Latinh - Jag flyger pÃ¥ mina egna vingar.

Current statusDịch
This text is available in the following languages: SwedishLatinhDutch

Nhóm chuyên mục Poetry

This translation request is "Meaning only".
Title
Jag flyger på mina egna vingar.
Text
Submitted by sajmon
Source language: Swedish

Jag flyger på mina egna vingar.
Remarks about the translation
I wan't to change the sentence "Cum propris suis alis volat" to be written in "first person" verision.


Brittish

Title
Volo propriis meis alis
Dịch
Latinh

Translated by pias
Target language: Latinh

Volo cum propriis meis alis
Validated by charisgre - 5 Tháng 2 2008 07:26





Bài gửi sau cùng

Tác giả
Bài gửi

1 Tháng 2 2008 15:40

charisgre
Tổng số bài gửi: 256
Hi, Pias. This doesn't make sense in Latin. You have two verbs in present tense.
From what I understand from sajmon's comment, this should be "I fly with my own wings". If this is the english translation from swedish, then there are a lot of mistakes in Latin and you should edit them.
Sajmon, could you confirm if the english is ok?

1 Tháng 2 2008 15:58

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
Hi charisgre!
This is a bit embarrassing, since I'm NOT good at latin
and don't know how to edit it right, sorry!
(I shoud not have done this translation at all)
Maybe you should reject it and let someone else do this translation.

Regards
Pia

3 Tháng 2 2008 22:13

sajmon
Tổng số bài gửi: 2
Hi charisgre! Yeah the english is perfectly ok! But from what you wrote in your comment, Pias translation is'nt correct?

5 Tháng 2 2008 07:25

charisgre
Tổng số bài gửi: 256
Hi to both of you. Pias, I didn't know is your first here and, as you can see, you weren't so far from the correct form. Just a little mistake . I think you shoul try to make other translations too.
Sajmon, now it is ok.

5 Tháng 2 2008 07:27

charisgre
Tổng số bài gửi: 256
Both the translation (title and box are ok. I mean "cum" can be used or not.

5 Tháng 2 2008 07:32

pias
Tổng số bài gửi: 8113
Thanks charisgre for your encouragement!

5 Tháng 2 2008 16:29

sajmon
Tổng số bài gửi: 2
OK! Thanks to all of you then!