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Guardian angel my guardian dear, to whom God´s love commits me here. Ever this day, be at my side, to light, to guard, to rule and guide. Amen.

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Angele qui custos mei es
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目的语言: 拉丁语

Angele qui custos mei es, care custos mei, cui Dei amor hic me commendat. Semper in hoc die a latere meo es, ut me illumines, ut defendas, ut regas et gubernes. Amen.
Aneta B.认可或编辑 - 2011年 八月 17日 13:46





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2011年 五月 16日 22:51

Aneta B.
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Angele qui custos mei es, care custos mei
--> Angele custos mi, custos care mi

They are supposed to be in the vocativus, aren't they?

2011年 五月 17日 14:08

Efylove
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I've chosen "mei" = genitive, pronoun "ego" ("guardian of me" because I've found that the original prayer has "custos mei" and not "custos meus".

http://digilander.libero.it/pietates/preghiere%20in%20latino.htm#ANGELE%20DEI



2011年 五月 17日 20:23

Aneta B.
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Yes, of course, it can be "mei custos", dear. It means exactly "guardian of me". However, if we wanted to say simply "my guardian" in the Nominative it would be "custos meus" in the Vocative - "custos mi". Both forms "mei custos" and "custos mi" are correct.

But the English source reads: "Guardian angel my guardian dear" not "Angel, who are my guardian..." (Angele qui custos mei es...)

That's why I suggested: "Angele custos mi, custos care mi"

Of course it can be also "Angele mei custos , mei custos care", but your version just contains something more what I can't find in the source above: ("qui custos mei es" ).

2011年 五月 25日 12:55

Efylove
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Ok, dear, I'll choose your second option.