Thank you for ordering our product(s). Please transfer the funds to the bank account below. As soon as the funds have reached my account, I will send the product(s) to your address.
Bemerkungen zur Übersetzung
I have used the word "funds" instead of "money" because it sound a bit rude in English to say "please transfer the money". I've also added punctuation, since you said you wanted to use this on your website.
Zuletzt bestätigt oder bearbeitet von dramati - 2 Januar 2008 04:42