daha fazlası,çoğumuz kendi içimizde nasıl derinden ve tutkuyla yaşarızı takdir etmeye geldim.Bağlantılarımız vahşidir.Aşklarımız bizi kaplar,bizi tanımlar,kendimiz ve diğerleri arasındaki bağlantıyı yok eder
Moreover, I came to appreciate how most of us live deeply and with passion inside. Our relations are wild. Our loves cover and identify us and destroy connections between our selves and others.
Zuletzt bestätigt oder bearbeitet von kafetzou - 22 August 2007 13:31
This is really well done, but I think that your translation of the first sentence is too free to be an accurate translation. Could you re-do just that part please?
Your translation should be true to the original. If you feel that the original has an awkward sentence, you should not make the translation so elegant that the awkwardness does not appear.