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Translation - German-English - Wenn ich in deine Augen sehe dann seh ich wie...

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Title	Wenn ich in deine Augen sehe dann seh ich wie...
Text Submitted by schmÃ¶p	Source language: German Sobald du mich mit deinem Atem auf meiner Haut berÃ¼hrst, spÃ¼r ich wie sehr du mich liebst.
Remarks about the translation	also sobald mein freun mich mit seinem atem auf meiner haut berÃ¼hrt das ich spÃ¼re wie sehr er mich liebt bitte in amerikanisches englisch

Title	As soon as you touch me ..
Translation English Translated by Bhatarsaigh	Target language: English As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me

Validated by Tantine - 21 January 2008 17:32

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		20 January 2008 23:03
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Hi Bhatarsaigh Your English looks good, but as I don't speak German that well, I need to ask for a poll. Bises Tantine
		21 January 2008 16:58
	sismo จำนวนข้อความ: 74	The sentence sounds too "heavy" in English. I would translate it like this: As soon as your breath touches my skin, I feel how much you love me OR As soon as I feel your breath on my skin I know how much you love me
		21 January 2008 17:30
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Hi sismo Thanks for your contribution, but I think the English is good, just needs some commas to help with the fluidity: "As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me" I'll edit in this way, then validate, since everyone else is ok with the translation. Bises Tantine I like the poetic way in which it was translated