Перевод - Немецкий-Английский - Wenn ich in deine Augen sehe dann seh ich wie...

Hi Bhatarsaigh

Your English looks good, but as I don't speak German that well, I need to ask for a poll.

Bises
Tantine

The sentence sounds too "heavy" in English. I would translate it like this: As soon as your breath touches my skin, I feel how much you love me OR As soon as I feel your breath on my skin I know how much you love me

Hi sismo

Thanks for your contribution, but I think the English is good, just needs some commas to help with the fluidity:

"As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me"

I'll edit in this way, then validate, since everyone else is ok with the translation.

Bises
Tantine



I like the poetic way in which it was translated