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Sobald du mich mit deinem Atem auf meiner Haut berührst, spür ich wie sehr du mich liebst.
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also sobald mein freun mich mit seinem atem auf meiner haut berührt das ich spüre wie sehr er mich liebt

bitte in amerikanisches englisch

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As soon as you touch me ..
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翻译 Bhatarsaigh
目的语言: 英语

As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me
Tantine认可或编辑 - 2008年 一月 21日 17:32





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2008年 一月 20日 23:03

Tantine
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Hi Bhatarsaigh

Your English looks good, but as I don't speak German that well, I need to ask for a poll.

Bises
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2008年 一月 21日 16:58

sismo
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The sentence sounds too "heavy" in English. I would translate it like this: As soon as your breath touches my skin, I feel how much you love me OR As soon as I feel your breath on my skin I know how much you love me

2008年 一月 21日 17:30

Tantine
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Hi sismo

Thanks for your contribution, but I think the English is good, just needs some commas to help with the fluidity:

"As soon as you touch me, with your breath on my skin, I feel how much you love me"

I'll edit in this way, then validate, since everyone else is ok with the translation.

Bises
Tantine



I like the poetic way in which it was translated