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Dear alexfatt,

My translation from English here is literally right but the poetic form is not preserved. e.g. if I replace "I love when you smile" with "I love you smiling" or "I'm in love when you smile" it'd become more concise and poetic in Farsi. What do you think? Are my suggestions consistent with original Italian?

Hi Salim!

Thanks for asking, I see your point. To me, it makes no difference saying "I love when you smile" or "I love you smiling" or "I'm in love when you smile", so feel free to choose the one which fits best (poetically speaking) in the text.

Dear alexfatt,

Please check out the translations remarks. If it is ok, I will evaluate it.

It's perfect. Mersi!