Translation - Russian-English - Л.М.Л.

Hi Melissenta

Wow, what a pretty poem.

I can't do Russian, so I'll have to ask for a poll, but your English seems good here.

Just one question, is it "hold and don't leave" or "hold me and don't leave" pr "hold on and don't leave"?

Bises
Tantine

If my sclerosis fails me today :-) It's lyrics to a song of the popular Ukranian girl group "ViaGra". Let me make a suggestion. I think "My Beloved Light Ray B.L.R" is better.

The best avatar ever, RainnSaw.

Where do these seemingly random abbreviations come from? The original says L.M.L.

I have hesitations concerning this variant: "Thread of light". Perhaps, it's possible to change my variant into "sunshine". It's more wide-spread in English songs.
To Tantine:
So, Tantine, I've corrected "hold me". Please, suggest your variant on translation of "thread of light". In Russian variant it means a "sunray" or "sunbeam" but in a diminutive-hypocoristic form and it refers to a beloved person. Which phrase or word is more appropriate in English in this case?

Л.М.Л. - the first letters of the phrase "Лучик Мой Любимый" in the Russian variant.

Thanks, Melissenta.

Hi Melissenta, Rainnsaw, Kafetzou, Casper

"Sunbeam" is a typical term of endearment in England, "Sunray" is not, so I would choose "Sunbeam".

Bises
Tantine

You ALONE have warmed me.
but you GLOW (imperative) with a WHITE light.

I must say, Veroliga's suggestions is right. And in the first sentence, it seems to me that she proposes to hold her hearth and then everything that comes with it. But it's not so important.

Hi All

Hi Jimi Rainnsaw, I was listening to Hendirx last night!!!!!

If everyone is Ok with the text in it's present form, I will validate.

Bises
Tantine

Tantine, I think you should go ahead and validate this one - it's been sitting for quite a while.

OK Let's go!