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번역 - 러시아어-영어 - Л.Ðœ.Л.현재 상황 번역
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Удержи, не отпуÑкай, моё Ñердце у Ñ‚ÐµÐ±Ñ Ð² руках,
Ты один Ð¼ÐµÐ½Ñ Ñогрел, Лучик Мой Любимый Л.Ðœ.Л.
Ð’ÑÑ‘ пройдет, а Ñ‚Ñ‹ Ñвети белым Ñветом на моём пути,
Ты один Ð¼ÐµÐ½Ñ Ñогрел, Лучик Мой Любимый Л.Ðœ.Л. |
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Hold me and don't leave, my heart is in your hands,
You're the one who warmed me, My Beloved Sunbeam M.B.S.
Everything will be gone but glow with a bright light on my way,
You're the one who warmed me, My Beloved Sunbeam M.B.S. | | The lyrics of a song of a popular Ukrainian band "ViaGra". |
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Tantine에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2007년 10월 9일 08:22
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2007년 9월 25일 19:57 | | | Hi Melissenta
Wow, what a pretty poem.
I can't do Russian, so I'll have to ask for a poll, but your English seems good here.
Just one question, is it "hold and don't leave" or "hold me and don't leave" pr "hold on and don't leave"?
Bises
Tantine | | |
2007년 9월 25일 23:00 | | | If my sclerosis fails me today :-) It's lyrics to a song of the popular Ukranian girl group "ViaGra". Let me make a suggestion. I think "My Beloved Light Ray B.L.R" is better. | | |
2007년 9월 26일 00:12 | | | The best avatar ever, RainnSaw.  | | |
2007년 9월 26일 05:22 | | | Where do these seemingly random abbreviations come from? The original says L.M.L. | | |
2007년 9월 26일 05:34 | | | I have hesitations concerning this variant: "Thread of light". Perhaps, it's possible to change my variant into "sunshine". It's more wide-spread in English songs.
To Tantine:
So, Tantine, I've corrected "hold me". Please, suggest your variant on translation of "thread of light". In Russian variant it means a "sunray" or "sunbeam" but in a diminutive-hypocoristic form and it refers to a beloved person. Which phrase or word is more appropriate in English in this case? | | |
2007년 9월 26일 05:36 | | | Л.Ðœ.Л. - the first letters of the phrase "Лучик Мой Любимый" in the Russian variant. | | |
2007년 9월 26일 05:44 | | | | | |
2007년 9월 26일 06:13 | | | Hi Melissenta, Rainnsaw, Kafetzou, Casper
"Sunbeam" is a typical term of endearment in England, "Sunray" is not, so I would choose "Sunbeam".
Bises
Tantine | | |
2007년 9월 26일 08:46 | | | You ALONE have warmed me.
but you GLOW (imperative) with a WHITE light. | | |
2007년 9월 26일 16:18 | | | I must say, Veroliga's suggestions is right. And in the first sentence, it seems to me that she proposes to hold her hearth and then everything that comes with it. But it's not so important. | | |
2007년 10월 2일 06:14 | | | Hi All
Hi Jimi Rainnsaw, I was listening to Hendirx last night!!!!!
If everyone is Ok with the text in it's present form, I will validate.
Bises
Tantine | | |
2007년 10월 8일 21:25 | | | Tantine, I think you should go ahead and validate this one - it's been sitting for quite a while. | | |
2007년 10월 9일 08:23 | | | |
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