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The swedish text says nothing about the room being messy? My translation would be "It is when Christopher searches his fathers' room looking for his book but instead finds a letter from his mum. He reads the letter and finds out she is still alive.

As Christopher searches for his book in his fathers room he instead finds a letter from his mum. He reads the letter and discovers that she still is alive.

Hi Lilly,
the Swedish source is about present time.

Not: "was looking", "found", "was still alive".
Maybe: "is looking", "finds", is still alive"

Yes, Pia, you are right. It is present.
For "fars rum" I guess I really misunderstood its meaning. Sorry.

Should I edit or do you prefer to reject it?

Lillian,
why a "sad smiley", you have helped me many, many times when it comes to english...and now I could give something back I think.

Supose that it wasn't me you asked about edit or not..

Thanks, Pia

I'll edit.

And thanks to the others who helped: birte and jensp.

the first sentence is incorrect. It should be: Det är när Christopher letar efter sin bok i sin fars rum som har istället hittar ett brev från sin mamma.