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번역 - 터키어-영어 - merhaba ben sizinle gerçekten tanışmak arkadaÅŸ...현재 상황 번역
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 이 번역의 "의미" 번역만을 요구합니다. | merhaba ben sizinle gerçekten tanışmak arkadaÅŸ... | | 원문 언어: 터키어
merhaba ben sizinle gerçekten tanışmak arkadaş olmak ve farklı kültürlerin insanları olarak bazı şeyleri birlikte paylaşmak istiyorum. |
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| Hello, I really want to meet you, become friends... | | 번역될 언어: 영어
Hello, I really want to meet you, become friends and share some things together as people from different cultures. |
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Tantine에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2008년 7월 15일 01:56
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2008년 7월 12일 15:15 | | | Hi Sunnybebek 
The English is very good, just one or two little suggestions for minor corrections.
It would make it more fluid and readable in English without the "with" in the first phrase. Taking out "to" before the two verbs would be good too. I think a comma between "things" and "together" helps too.
Then the phrase would read:
Hello, I really want to meet you, make friends and share some things, together with people from different cultures.
Let me know what you think, and we'll edit. Ive set a poll as I don't speak any Turkish.
Bises
Tantine
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2008년 7월 12일 23:48 | | | hello, I want to really get to know you, become friends and share some things as people from different cultures. | | |
2008년 7월 13일 03:09 | | | kafetzou's suggestion conveys the meaning better especially after the comma "become friends and share some things as people from different cultures."
There isn't any problem with the part before the comma. | | |
2008년 7월 13일 09:20 | | | Thanks everyone for your corrections. I hope now it's better. | | |
2008년 7월 13일 11:09 | | | make friends: being friend, I want share some .... | | |
2008년 7월 13일 11:22 | | | "become" instead of "make" would be better.Just replace this too and it will be ok | | |
2008년 7월 15일 01:56 | | | Hi all
Thanks for everyone's help.
Netcevap I'm awfully sorry but in the correction that you suggest there are two flaws "being friend, I want share some .." firstly "being friend" doesn't mean anything in English "being friendly" maybe. Secondly, "I want share some" the verb "share" is used here in it's infinitive form and needs "to" before it => "to share".
Since the text is fine now, I'll validate 
Enjoy your points Sunnybebek
Bises
Tantine CC: Rise netcevap |
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