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27 Январь 2010 04:00 |
| | Accept yourself for who you are, and it will be much easier, to accept others for who they are. |
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27 Январь 2010 06:11 |
| | The first line is ackward, better: "the way you are", like in the third line. In the second line the word "du" has no equivalent, maybe add "for you" at the end. |
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27 Январь 2010 09:40 |
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piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Tanushe, I like your proposal, it makes the text flow better. Thanks 
Jairhaas, you are right about that "du", but IMO it's not nesessary to repeat it here.
PS. I'm sure the English expert (in this case Lilian) wont set a poll if something is "ackward" or strange with the TL. |
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27 Январь 2010 10:34 |
| | I would say: accept the way who you are.... |
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27 Январь 2010 14:11 |
| | Accept yourself as you are/the way you are |
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27 Январь 2010 18:58 |
| | Accept yourself as you are,... |
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27 Январь 2010 20:22 |
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piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Thanks for suggestions!
It seems many of you don't agree with "for who you are". I think it's a matter of taste, to me they have very similar meaning.
Lilian?
CC: gamine tasosspanos Tanushe jairhaas Donna22 |
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27 Январь 2010 23:59 |
| | I don't see anything awkward in the text, if it conveys the meaning of the original I'd accept is the way it is now. |
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28 Январь 2010 00:00 |
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28 Январь 2010 00:24 |
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28 Январь 2010 00:28 |
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BamsaКол-во сообщений: 1524 | Accept yourself as you are |
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28 Январь 2010 02:16 |
| | As far as I'm concerned, the repetition should be kept:
accept the way you are... the way they are.
For example |
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28 Январь 2010 08:36 |
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piasКол-во сообщений: 8113 | Hello
I think you are right about the concistency, Isildur__ !! jairhass had the same idea. Thanks again for comments everyone. So, if you agreee Lilian, I like to do some edits:
"Accept yourself the way you are,
and it will be much easier,
to accept others the way they are." |
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