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| | 27 Janvier 2010 04:00 |
| | Accept yourself for who you are, and it will be much easier, to accept others for who they are. |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 06:11 |
| | The first line is ackward, better: "the way you are", like in the third line. In the second line the word "du" has no equivalent, maybe add "for you" at the end. |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 09:40 |
| piasNombre de messages: 8113 | Tanushe, I like your proposal, it makes the text flow better. Thanks
Jairhaas, you are right about that "du", but IMO it's not nesessary to repeat it here.
PS. I'm sure the English expert (in this case Lilian) wont set a poll if something is "ackward" or strange with the TL. |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 10:34 |
| | I would say: accept the way who you are.... |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 14:11 |
| gamineNombre de messages: 4611 | Accept yourself as you are/the way you are |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 18:58 |
| | Accept yourself as you are,... |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 20:22 |
| piasNombre de messages: 8113 | Thanks for suggestions!
It seems many of you don't agree with "for who you are". I think it's a matter of taste, to me they have very similar meaning.
Lilian?
CC: gamine tasosspanos Tanushe jairhaas Donna22 |
| | 27 Janvier 2010 23:59 |
| | I don't see anything awkward in the text, if it conveys the meaning of the original I'd accept is the way it is now. |
| | 28 Janvier 2010 00:00 |
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| | 28 Janvier 2010 00:24 |
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| | 28 Janvier 2010 00:28 |
| BamsaNombre de messages: 1524 | Accept yourself as you are |
| | 28 Janvier 2010 02:16 |
| | As far as I'm concerned, the repetition should be kept:
accept the way you are... the way they are.
For example |
| | 28 Janvier 2010 08:36 |
| piasNombre de messages: 8113 | Hello
I think you are right about the concistency, Isildur__ !! jairhass had the same idea. Thanks again for comments everyone. So, if you agreee Lilian, I like to do some edits:
"Accept yourself the way you are,
and it will be much easier,
to accept others the way they are." |