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Dịch - French-English - just me or just dance

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just me or just dance
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Submitted by nounou1
Source language: French

Rien de plus simple que l'expression du corps, ça me rend plus forte et plus sûre de moi; tout ce que je ne peux exprimer oralement, je le fais avec la danse; un nouveau monde
s'ouvre à moi, un monde si différent mais si réel. J'en fais une obsession saine et spirituelle
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Title
There's nothing simpler than corporal expression
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Translated by lilian canale
Target language: English

There's nothing simpler than corporal expression, it makes me stronger and more confident. What I can't express through words, I express through dance. It has opened a whole new world to me, such a different but such a real world. It has become a healthy, spiritual obsession to me."
Validated by dramati - 5 Tháng 4 2008 23:02





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24 Tháng 3 2008 11:12

dramati
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This is a very fine literal translation but it loses much when translating it in this way into English. I think it could use a bit more work and freedom of expression in order to get the same thought across in a better prose...which you are more than capable of doing.

24 Tháng 3 2008 16:05

lilian canale
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What about this new "free" version?

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Not a simple expression of the body, it makes me stronger and more confident. All that I can't express by words, I do with dancing, a new world.
It is opened to me a so different but so real world.
I make a healthy and spiritual obsession out of it.