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翻译 - 土耳其语-英语 - Dalma yine güzel insan niyeti belirsiz sevdalara...

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Dalma yine güzel insan niyeti belirsiz sevdalara...
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源语言: 土耳其语

Dalma yine güzel insan niyeti belirsiz sevdalara
ümitsizce düşünmek değil delicesine sevilmek senin hakkın, çünkü sen sevilmeye değer insansın.

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Don't be caught up
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翻译 kfeto
目的语言: 英语

Don't be fooled again by lovers whose intentions are not clear, you are a good person.
You're entitled to, not hopeless thoughts but to being loved passionately, because you are a person worthy of love.

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added 'you' to indicate vocative
changed thinking to thoughts, being loved to love
dramati认可或编辑 - 2008年 四月 5日 20:10





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2008年 四月 4日 13:52

kfeto
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yes this actually works better, dramati

2008年 四月 4日 20:06

mygunes
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where is "güzel insan" ???

2008年 四月 5日 16:27

kfeto
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i had written 'you good person you'
with the 'you' added to make clear he addresses the person with that, but since it sounded really awkward dramati changed it to the 'you are a good person' which i must admit is way better and since that is the compliment the person wants to make anyway is it correct also.
i used good because guzel refers to inner beauty= goodness here

2008年 四月 5日 14:39

mygunes
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ok, but now "you are a good person." is not correct, because you must adresse to "good person"

"güzel insana" hitap ediliyor kfeto, sen iyi bir insansın demiyor.


2008年 四月 5日 18:33

kfeto
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true/haklisin
ben su bakimindan dusunuyorum: turkcede hitap etmesi, aslinda kime bu sozleri soyledigini belirtmek icin (sanki bu sozleri soyledigi odada hep cirkin ve bi guzel kisi varmis gibi)degil, guzel insan oldugunu soylemek/iltifat etmek icin
ve bunu inglizcede normal cumleye cevirmekten zarar gelmez gibi

i guess it comes down to whether you value emulating the correct form of adressing the other/vocative in the source(güzel insan)
or
to a correct form/sentence in the target(you are a good person)


2008年 四月 5日 19:08

dramati
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I agree entirely with Kfeto