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Traduko - Germana-Angla - Aphorisme 70Nuna stato Traduko
Kategorio Eseo | | Teksto Submetigx per Minny | Font-lingvo: Germana
Verschwende deine kraft nicht auf etwas, was du nicht beeinflussen kannst. Verwende sie für das, was du beeinflussen kannst. | | Britisch Fransösisch aus Frankreich |
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| | TradukoAngla Tradukita per bgl88 | Cel-lingvo: Angla
Don't waste your energy on things over which you have no influence. Use it for things you can influence. |
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Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de lilian canale - 30 Januaro 2009 10:51
Lasta Afiŝo | | | | | 29 Januaro 2009 01:07 | | | Maybe influence instead of control. | | | 29 Januaro 2009 09:36 | | MinnyNombro da afiŝoj: 271 | | | | 29 Januaro 2009 10:06 | | | "influence" instead of "control" is better | | | 29 Januaro 2009 14:54 | | bgl88Nombro da afiŝoj: 32 | I agree, usually I would translate 'beeinflussen' as influence, but it does not sound right to me here, if you simply use it both times in this translation.
It has been asked for specifically in British English, so, as an English person, I wrote what I think seems the best way to express what is written in German, in a British style that befits an Aphorism.
But thank you for making me think again about using 'influence' - it enabled me to incorporate it | | | 30 Januaro 2009 08:30 | | | I think there should be more parallelism between the first half and the second half of the quotation, as in the original.
For example, we could either use "control"
Don't waste your energy on things you can't control. Use it for things you can control.
or "influence"
Don't waste your energy on things over which you have no influence. Use it for things you can influence.
But meaning-wise, the translation is fine, of course! | | | 30 Januaro 2009 09:34 | | MinnyNombro da afiŝoj: 271 | I wote for IanMegill2's 2nd translation"Don't waste your energy on things over which you have no influence. Use it for things you can influence."
Thanks a lot all of you for your endeavours!
:-) | | | 30 Januaro 2009 10:28 | | | Yes, sorry I didn't see Ian's post before voting, but I think "use it for things you can influence" would be better. |
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