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Title	Estimado Cliente, Informamos que jÃ¡ se encontra...
Text Submitted by nikas32	Source language: Portuguese Estimado Cliente, Informamos que jÃ¡ se encontra a pagamento o recibo da sua apÃ³lice automÃ³vel,que poderÃ¡ ser efectuado atravÃ©s dos meios indicados no verso. Para manter a regularidade das garantias contratuais,lembramos que deverÃ¡ proceder Ã liquidaÃ§Ã£o do recibo atÃ© Ã data limite de pagamento. Agradecendo a sua preferÃªncia pela nossa companhia,mantemo-nos Ã sua disposiÃ§Ã£o. Com os melhores cumprimentos,
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Title

Dear customer,

Translation

English

Translated by

goncin

Target language: English

Dear customer,

We hereby inform you that the receipt of your car insurance is now available for payment, which may be done through the means listed on the back.
In order to maintain the regularity of contractual warranties, we remind you that you ought to provide the settlement by the deadline.
We thank you for choosing our company and remain at your disposal.
Yours sincerely,

Validated by lilian canale

- 7 August 2008 14:54

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		7 August 2008 12:35
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	just some small suggestions: - 'now' for 'already'. Less literal but more commonly used in English - 'we remind you that you should provide...' - 'we thank you for choosing our company'
		7 August 2008 12:44
	goncin จำนวนข้อความ: 3706	Thanks, Lein! I've taken into consideration most of your suggestions, but I'd rather keep "ought to" instead of changing for "should", because the former expresses better a mandatory behaviour. CC: lilian canale
		7 August 2008 13:11
	Lein จำนวนข้อความ: 3389	OK! I think in that case it would be best to say 'we remind you that you ought to...' (you don't 'just' remind - you remind someone)
		7 August 2008 13:23
	goncin จำนวนข้อความ: 3706