AMORE A DISTANCIA ME SEPARA DE TI, O QUE EU MAIS QUERIA NESSE MOMENTO ERA PODER ENTENDER SEU IDIOMA, SE PELO MENOS VOCE ME ENTENDESSE EU FICARIA FELIZ...SEMPRE ESTOU OLHANDO SUA FOTO,TU ÉS MUITO BONITO.
LOVE, THE DISTANCE IS KEEPING ME AWAY FROM YOU, WHAT I WOULD LIKE THE MOST AT THIS MOMENT WOULD BE TO BE ABLE TO UNDERSTAND YOUR LANGUAGE, IF AT LEAST YOU COULD UNDERSTAND ME I WOULD BE HAPPY... I AM ALWAYS LOOKING AT YOUR PHOTO, YOU ARE VERY HANDSOME.
Nakoniec potvrdené alebo vydané kafetzou - 8 augusta 2007 04:53
I think it's a faithful translation of the Portuguese text. I'm not evaluating the English correctness, it may need some edits, but my opinion focuses on the Portuguese.
That would only be true if present tense in Portuguese were always parallel to present tense in English, but it definitely is not.
When you are describing an action that is going on right now in English, you must use the present progressive (continuous) tense, unless it is a stative verb, such as love, think, have, etc.