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Hi again,

A few minor edits, tell me if you agree.

I want to be happy with my family. May we have a home that only belongs to us, and which has a living room, a kitchen, a study room downstairs and three bedrooms upstairs and toilets both downstairs and upstairs.

hi,

Bedrooms and toilets are OK, but she says not "may we have a home which has..", but "may we have a home and may there be a living room.."

Yes, but that sounds really weird in English.
It should be "...may there be there a living room..."
See what I mean?
We need another "there" there or at the end of the line. You know that sometimes we have to adapt the wording a little to sound more natural.
Another option would be:
"may it have..."

Theeeen, I take "may it have"

Great! It's good to have you active again!