Translation - Úcráinis-English - Львівський Дракон

Hi guys,

This evaluation (well, the latest translation effort) is back - I know there is one word in the original which is difficult or unclear, but I am hoping we can get to a compromise and find an acceptable translation
Thanks!

I guess that "until dawn" variant is the most suitable one

Thank you Felicitas

Is there anything else that should be edited or explained in the notes, in your opinion?

CC: Felicitas ramarren

I think it's OK

I agree with the edited variant, now it sounds more or less clear

Thank you both!