Nee kono machi ga yuuyami ni somaru toki wa chiisana tane wo otosu darou. Fumi-katamerareta tsuchi wo michi da to yobu no naraba me wo tojiru koto de mo ai kanaa?
翻訳についてのコメント
There are two lines missing from these song lyrics. Here is the complete text: Nee kono machi ga yuuyami ni somaru toki wa SEKAI NO DOKOKA DE ASAHI GA SASU KIMI NO TE NO NAKA SONO HANA GA KARERU TOKI WA chiisana tane wo otosu darou. Fumi-katamerareta tsuchi wo michi da to yobu no naraba me wo tojiru koto de mo ai kanaa? THE TRANSLATION IS BASED THE CORRECTED VERSION ABOVE, i.e. IT ALSO INCLUDES THE TRANSLATION OF THE TWO MISSING LINES.
Here's the original, from Lord Google:
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The second line should begin:
Fumi-katamerareta
Otherwise, it's perfect!