תרגום - פורטוגזית ברזילאית-צרפתית - Como você está? Tenho um carinho muito grande...

"querida" is not "jolie" (only one "l" at "jolie" )

"Sabes que você é muito querida" : "Tu sais que tu m'es très chère", ou "tu sais que je t'aime beaucoup" ou "tu sais combien je t'aime"

As there's a dot after "querida" and as there is an interrogation mark after "café", it is a question, and last sentence is not relative to the preview one. Use of "lorsque" is not proper to the interrogative form in French.

"Quando iremos tomar o nosso café?" Quand prendrons-nous notre café?"

Merci Fracky,
J'ai corrigé le text.

OK, c'est validé!