Translation - Arabic-English - أريد Ùقط ان يكون الØب والØب لي من ÙŠØبCurrent status Translation
Category Explanations - Love / Friendship  This translation request is "Meaning only". | أريد Ùقط ان يكون الØب والØب لي من ÙŠØب | | Source language: Arabic
أريد Ùقط ان يكون الØب والØب لي من ÙŠØب |
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Translated by  jaq84 | Target language: English
All I want is for love to be
And love, to me, is he who loves |
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Last validated or edited by Tantine - 18 August 2008 00:20
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3 August 2008 16:21 | | | Hi jaq84 
Do you mean "All I want is for love to exist", if so maybe we should add "for" => "All I want is for love to be"
Also, a few commas would make the text more easily readable in English.
"And love, to me, is (he) who loves" I think that the "he" here would also help with the readability.
I'll set a poll as soon as you have done the edits
Bises
Tantine | | |
14 August 2008 22:16 | | 
jaq84Number of messages: 568 | Thanx Tantine. I have done the edits. | | |
16 August 2008 00:15 | | | الØب بالنسبة لي Ùˆ ليس الØب لي | | |
16 August 2008 14:26 | | | Hi Hamza
Could you please write your comment in English, please? | | |
17 August 2008 15:15 | | 
C.K.Number of messages: 173 | Hi jaq84,
From the way you translated this phrase, telling me that sometimes I have to add/adjust the phrase in Arabic (original requested translation) so that it can be translated correctly into English.
To all:
An adjustment that improves the meaning won't harm the requested translation, isn't it?
C.K. |
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