Превод - Сръбски-Английски - Gube proveravam jel to tvoj .....

Hi zciric

One or two small corrections

I've edited and put "about the free shares" instead of "for the free", and I have added "they" in "that they are giving here".

I'm not sure that "take" is the correct verb here, maybe it should be "get them" rather than "take them?"

I've set a poll, as usual

Bises
Tantine

Gube, I'm checking to see if this is your old phone number. Did you hear about the free shares that are being giving away here to all citizens of Serbia. Ask in the embassy if Milica, Vlada and aunt can get them too.

Mislim da bi prva rečenica trebala da glasi:"Gube, I'm checking if that is your old phone number."

Thanks Tantine, for "polishing" the translation.
It is OK for me.

Also, all other suggestion are welcomed if they make the translation better...

Bye