Översättning - Engelska-Latin - I'm a ....I'm the....

Efee, how would you improve the translation?

CC: Efylove

Two points:
- "umbra sum id est in speculo" ---> "quae est in speculo" ("that" is a relative pronoun)
- I don't understand that "anima - nervorum ictus"...

Yes, you're right, Efee! I firstly read "that's" as "it means" --> "id est"(i.e.), but your interpretation is more possible here.

Yes, I had a problem with translating the "soul-shock"... How do you understand it, Efee?

"shock" in Latin is just "ictus,-us" or "nervorum ictus" and I connected it with "soul" (anima), but maybe it was concerned with the "soul-music"... Hm...

Hello Lilly! Could you tell me what you understand by the line "I'm the soul-shock", please?

CC: lilian canale

I think you could translate just "animae ictus" or "nervorum ictus", otherwise it could be ambigous.

Maybe this would be better?

"Ego ictus in anima/pro anima sum".