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תרגום - דנית-אנגלית - øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i...מצב נוכחי תרגום
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| øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i... | | שפת המקור: דנית
øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i hjertet kan ingen se |
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| | תרגוםאנגלית תורגם על ידי Lein | שפת המטרה: אנגלית
The eyes can smile The mouth can laugh But the pain in the heart, no-one can see. | | A translation with a bit more freedom:
A smile in the eyes A laugh on the face But the sorrowful heart is in an unseen place
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הודעה אחרונה | | | | | 30 אפריל 2010 14:17 | | | "Eyes can smile" otherwise it should have been "øjnene".
"Mouthes can smile" otherwise "mund".
I'd say "the "the pain"
instead of "sadness" which , in Danish is "tristheden'.
But perhaps it's only a
synonyme. | | | 30 אפריל 2010 15:46 | | Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | I'm happy with all these suggestions.
Thanks Lene | | | 30 אפריל 2010 16:48 | | | The addition of a definite article is acceptable in this case, even if absent in the original. But "munde" is plural. Furthermore, sometimes the order of the words is crucial, not for the meaning, buit for the emphasis. A better translation would be: "but the pain in/of the heart, nobody notices" or something like that. | | | 30 אפריל 2010 17:30 | | piasמספר הודעות: 8114 | "pain" instead of "sadness".
Others, fine in my opinion. | | | 30 אפריל 2010 17:38 | | Leinמספר הודעות: 3389 | Lilian, please edit or reject as you see fit - off on holidays now | | | 1 מאי 2010 00:13 | | | "øjne" is plural too - singulat is "øje" so I don't think we should use the definite article. CC: jairhaas pias | | | 1 מאי 2010 00:48 | | | But in English, Lene, the article is correct | | | 1 מאי 2010 14:53 | | | | | | 1 מאי 2010 16:21 | | piasמספר הודעות: 8114 | Lene, you "called" me, I'm not an English expert ... but I AGREE with you, it's not definite in the original!
I think this must be one of the trickiest things to learn about English grammar!! There are 'rules' for articles, right... but it seems there are also many exceptions, d'oh! | | | 2 מאי 2010 22:28 | | | |
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