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Vertimas - Danų-Anglų - øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i...Esamas statusas Vertimas
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| øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i... | | Originalo kalba: Danų
øjne kan smile munde kan le men smerten i hjertet kan ingen se |
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| | VertimasAnglų Išvertė Lein | Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų
The eyes can smile The mouth can laugh But the pain in the heart, no-one can see. | | A translation with a bit more freedom:
A smile in the eyes A laugh on the face But the sorrowful heart is in an unseen place
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Paskutinės žinutės | | | | | 30 balandis 2010 14:17 | | | "Eyes can smile" otherwise it should have been "øjnene".
"Mouthes can smile" otherwise "mund".
I'd say "the "the pain"
instead of "sadness" which , in Danish is "tristheden'.
But perhaps it's only a
synonyme. | | | 30 balandis 2010 15:46 | | LeinŽinučių kiekis: 3389 | I'm happy with all these suggestions.
Thanks Lene | | | 30 balandis 2010 16:48 | | | The addition of a definite article is acceptable in this case, even if absent in the original. But "munde" is plural. Furthermore, sometimes the order of the words is crucial, not for the meaning, buit for the emphasis. A better translation would be: "but the pain in/of the heart, nobody notices" or something like that. | | | 30 balandis 2010 17:30 | | piasŽinučių kiekis: 8113 | "pain" instead of "sadness".
Others, fine in my opinion. | | | 30 balandis 2010 17:38 | | LeinŽinučių kiekis: 3389 | Lilian, please edit or reject as you see fit - off on holidays now | | | 1 gegužė 2010 00:13 | | | "øjne" is plural too - singulat is "øje" so I don't think we should use the definite article. CC: jairhaas pias | | | 1 gegužė 2010 00:48 | | | But in English, Lene, the article is correct | | | 1 gegužė 2010 14:53 | | | | | | 1 gegužė 2010 16:21 | | piasŽinučių kiekis: 8113 | Lene, you "called" me, I'm not an English expert ... but I AGREE with you, it's not definite in the original!
I think this must be one of the trickiest things to learn about English grammar!! There are 'rules' for articles, right... but it seems there are also many exceptions, d'oh! | | | 2 gegužė 2010 22:28 | | | |
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