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Translation - Arabic-English - الحب الضائع إلى من عاش في أعماقي رغم أن حبه لي...

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Title
الحب الضائع إلى من عاش في أعماقي رغم أن حبه لي...
Text
Submitted by skan3220
Source language: Arabic

الحب الضائع إلى من عاش في أعماقي رغم أن حبه لي قد تلاشى إلى من أسكنته قلبي رغم الجرح الذي أصابني فيه
إلى من سيظل الأوحد في قلبي حتى وإن غاب عني إليه وإلى كل من يعانون مثلي أهدي هذه الهمسة
تتساءل أين وكيف ولمَ؟
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Title
the lost love, to the one who lived deep inside of me
Translation
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Translated by elmota
Target language: English

the lost love:
to the one who lived deep inside of me although his love for me has vanished, whom I kept inside my heart in spite of the wound he caused, and who will remain the only one in my heart even when absent; to him and to whoever suffers like I do, I dedicate this whisper:
we wonder when, how, and for what?
Remarks about the translation
the problem is that the original lacks punctuation and sounds like it has a second part chopped out of it
Validated by kafetzou - 2 August 2007 00:15





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27 July 2007 20:29

kafetzou
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Hi elmota

Can you put in some punctuation here? It doesn't make sense in English in its current form.

29 July 2007 23:59

kafetzou
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Hi again elmota

This is better, but there are still some problems in English. For example, you can't say "to whom lived ..." - it has to be "to him who lived ..." This is true of all the cases where you have "to whom + active verb".

30 July 2007 06:31

elmota
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this looks better eh? (the second one is still whom right?)
thanx

30 July 2007 15:55

kafetzou
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OK - thanks. I did a few more edits - please check and let me know if it's still a correct translation.

30 July 2007 18:15

elmota
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we sometimes wonder when the simplest answer is stairing at us in the eye
this one is much better and pretty simple!

30 July 2007 18:21

kafetzou
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Thanks!