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11 Липня 2009 23:44 |
| | The time I didn't think about you is the time I didn't live. |
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12 Липня 2009 00:03 |
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handyyКількість повідомлень: 2118 | Hi Sunny, 
I agree with merdogan's suggestion, but with a few edits:
"The time at which I don't think about you is the time I don't live" |
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12 Липня 2009 01:28 |
| | But is that present or past? CC: merdogan |
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12 Липня 2009 02:29 |
| | I agree with Handyy it's present. |
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12 Липня 2009 08:45 |
| | It can be also "present". |
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12 Липня 2009 12:06 |
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handyyКількість повідомлень: 2118 | zaman dır --> present
zaman dı --> past
It must be present, Lilian.  |
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12 Липня 2009 12:33 |
| | Yes, Handyy is right!
Could you edit it, please, Lilly?  |
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12 Липня 2009 12:40 |
| | Actually, I don't see a relevant difference between the versions 
We would be saying the same thing just using more words. If the line were inserted in a poem or something I agree we should try to be loyal to the original wording, but for an isolated line, "The time when" or simply "When" is the same.
Do you think that edit is really needed, handyy? |
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12 Липня 2009 12:58 |
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handyyКількість повідомлень: 2118 | Well, Lili, I thought we should be loyal to the original text, as it is not "meaning only" request. Besides, we don't know for what purpose the requester wants this translation -it could be both a line of a poem or just an isolated line.
Still, you're the expert here; if you think, the edit is not needed, then, let's remain it as it is now! |
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12 Липня 2009 13:04 |
| | Ok, let's keep the original wording, then
Thanks guys for your help |
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