Omule, fii bun ca mierea, Curat ca ceara Şi blând ca albina.
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Am nevoie de traducere in aceste limbi va rog sa ma ajutati, am incercat pe google translate dar traduce mot-a-mot si nu stiu daca este si corect. Va raman datoare. Help?!
Man, be good like honey, Pure like wax, And gentle like a bee.
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The word "curat" means "clean" but I don't find that it fits the context well; we usually refer to a human person as being 'pure' (of heart - as the source text suggests it). I used capital letter for 'man' as it refers to the human being in general and not the man as the male human.
U vleresua ose u publikua se fundi nga lilian canale - 28 Prill 2010 19:08
I think it doesn't need "my" in front of "man". It's smth general, not regarding anyone's man and not precisely about a man, just a human being and how he/she should be.