hvis, det skulle være noe problemer så kan hicham gå til achak på service de mille for ordne i det tillattelser som mangler for å levere de til fiat, de andre papirer kan du gi dem til omar for rett kopi ... er det noe annent så tar du kontakt meg meg
If there is any problem Hicham can go to Achak at Service de Mille to take care of the approvals needed and deliver them to Fiat. You can give the other papers to Omar to get the right copy. If you need anything else, just contact me.
As I told you your translation is fine and the source text a bit weird. Personally I think you last suggestion is better otherwise there will be problems with the other languages. But I can't decide for you. You are a real good translator,(have noticed it )but for sure I prefer the second solution. Go ahead, do as you feel it.