翻译 - 巴西葡萄牙语-英语 - Teu sangue pode ser nobre, mas cheira a ferrugem...

Does blood smell like rust? I never noticed! It must be the iron.

It's a poem.
Has its special meaning.

Oh - I thought it was an expression in Portuguese.

I was trying to avoid this 'like' repetition.
Was the way I wrote 'too' wrong?

Not really - I just thought it sounded more natural this way (less formal).

I did another edit to avoid the repetition of "like" as you said. I hope you like it.

Aha.
Thanks.
It sounds much better than the others.