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Témakör Ének Ez a forditàsi kérés "Csak az értelme". | Kordon boyu faytonlar Biri gidip biri gelecek ... | | Nyelvröl forditàs: Török
Kordon boyu faytonlar Biri gidip biri gelecek Körfez vapurlarıyla Sanki dans edecek. |
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| There are phaetons along the Kordon | | Forditando nyelve: Angol
There are phaetons along the Kordon As one goes, another will come As if they were going to dance With the ships of the gulf | | Kordon is a famous area name in Ä°zmir. |
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Validated by kafetzou - 10 Augusztus 2008 19:04
Legutolsó üzenet | | | | | 10 Augusztus 2008 07:22 | | | Nice translation, buketnur, but there are a few corrections:
You should probably put a comment underneath it, saying that the Kordon is a famous seaside area of Izmir.
phaetons --> horse-drawn carriages
One of them will go and one of them will come --> As one goes, another will come (it's more poetic-sounding)
Also, you need "the" before "gulf". | | | 10 Augusztus 2008 11:37 | | | Thanks kafetzou, I made these changes.
But should I write "horse-drawn carriages" istead of "phaetons"?
| | | 10 Augusztus 2008 19:03 | | | I have never heard the word "phaeton" in English, but I just checked my big Oxford Dictionary, and it's in there, so I guess it's your choice. I just asked my monolingual boyfriend, too, and he knew what it was, so I guess it's OK. |
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