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Hi Lilly!
Could you help me out here with a bridge, please?

CC: lilian canale

"I am a person full of feelings,
I just say what I feel,
I am the person who enters your thoughts,
to be able to always tell you that I love you."

Thank you, Lilly!

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Only one line under doubt, Alex:

sum quidam intrat in mente tua
--> (Homo) qui mentem tuam intrat/init/introit sum

Since this is probably a song or a poem, I translated "the person" as "quidam" in order not to repeat "homo".
Can I do it or should I replace it with "homo qui"?

"in mentem tuam intrat" > "mentem tuam intrat"

And I agree with you on the word order too.

"(in)mentem tuam intrat"
Well, actually not "in" was disturbing in this case, but your ablative after "intrat" (mente tua).

I'm sorry, Alex, but I couldn't accept your " sum quidam" here. Sth is missing...
I believe that the best option (avoiding the repetition) would be:
"is qui mentem tuam intrat sum".
What do you think?

Well, if "quidam" can't be kept, I accept "is qui mentem tuam intrat sum".

Hmm. Were you to prefer using "quidam", you could translate it as follows:

"Quidam mentem tuam intrans sum"

Thank you, but don't worry, I won't suffer if we leave "quidam" out.
I like also "is qui mentem tuam intrat sum".

Dobranoc!

He,he! I'm not going to make you suffer for sure!
Dobranoc, mój drogi Aleksie!