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Translation - Serbian-English - Senke proÅ¡losti

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Title	Senke proÅ¡losti
Text Submitted by Branka87	Source language: Serbian Svi smo senke proÅ¡losti, sutra je juÄe, gde smo danas ja i ti? Dalâ€™ su â€™svetli groboviâ€™? ili su mrtvi veÄ‡ odavno umorni? Svi smo senke proÅ¡losti, sutra je juÄe, gde smo danas ja i ti? Dalâ€™ su â€™svetli groboviâ€™? ...ili su mrtvi umorni?
Remarks about the translation	americki engleski, rep pesma

Title	We're all shadows from the past, ...
Translation English Translated by maki_sindja	Target language: English We're all shadows from the past, tomorrow is yesterday, where are we today, you and me? Are the 'graves shiny'? Or the dead are tired since long ago? We're all shadows from the past, tomorrow is yesterday, where are we today, you and me? Are the 'graves shiny'? ...Or the dead are tired?
Remarks about the translation	shiny - bright

Validated by Tantine - 6 February 2009 23:19

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	ผู้ตั้ง	ตอบ
		26 January 2009 20:01
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Hi maki_sindja How sad this poem is. Beautiful too but sad. I have set a poll. Bises Tantine
		27 January 2009 15:24
	Khalo จำนวนข้อความ: 21	I wouldn't put "the shadows", since here I don't think they refer to some particular shadows, "where am I an you" is just not right: concordance is not right, maybe you should say "where are we today, you and me", and "graves shining" means that the graves are producing some kind of light, it indicates some kind of action, whereas "svetli" in Serbian is an adjective describing the graves
		28 January 2009 11:22
	BORIME4KA จำนวนข้อความ: 30	English grammar
		28 January 2009 23:37
	Tantine จำนวนข้อความ: 2747	Hi BORIME4KA Could you be more explicit? Otherwise your comments are of no use to me Hi maki_sindja I think khalo has a point with the "where are we..." bit. Maybe we should edit in that direction. For the "shining" bit, would it not be possible to replace it with "shiny" which is an adjective, hence describing the state of the graves? And remove the "the" before shadows Let me know what you think Bises Tantine
		4 February 2009 12:50
	maki_sindja จำนวนข้อความ: 1206	Thank you Khalo and Tantine. I corrected. Is it OK now?
		17 February 2009 13:02
	CursedZephyr จำนวนข้อความ: 148	Really great!