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Hi maki_sindja

How sad this poem is. Beautiful too but sad.

I have set a poll.

Bises
Tantine

I wouldn't put "the shadows", since here I don't think they refer to some particular shadows, "where am I an you" is just not right: concordance is not right, maybe you should say "where are we today, you and me", and "graves shining" means that the graves are producing some kind of light, it indicates some kind of action, whereas "svetli" in Serbian is an adjective describing the graves

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Hi BORIME4KA

Could you be more explicit? Otherwise your comments are of no use to me

Hi maki_sindja

I think khalo has a point with the "where are we..." bit. Maybe we should edit in that direction. For the "shining" bit, would it not be possible to replace it with "shiny" which is an adjective, hence describing the state of the graves? And remove the "the" before shadows

Let me know what you think

Bises
Tantine

Thank you Khalo and Tantine.

I corrected.
Is it OK now?

Really great!