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Hi Via,

What about:
"Snejke, we've jogged greatly today! Do you want to repeat it tomorrow?"

I just tried to express the style of the original, because it is in "yo, bro" stylistiscs...

It looks terrible that way, doesn't it?
At least that 'great' should be 'greatly'.

I corrected it, just without the past perfect tense, it should be simple...

защо не напишеш: Why dont we do that tommorow again?, Shall we do that ...

'Let's go again tomorrow' instead of 'do you want to repeat it tomorrow'

Hi Mike,

Could you tell us why you rejected this translation?

Превода е правилен... но си мисля че може да звучи по разговорно, с което да е по близко до зададения текст