Translation - Deens-Engels - tandkrone

I changed "I'm coming" to "I come" and "shall" to "will".

I would definately say "the tooth is not to be pulled out" in stead of "the tooth will not.." (this is actually also what is says in the Danish original)

OK; I changed it. I also changed "come" to "go", as this person is clearly not in Denmark now.

I think I´d personally change it to "when I come back home to Denmark"....

In English, we can only say "come" if the speaker is there now.

Tak for en fin oversættelse!

ok, English isn´t usually a language I would translate INTO, but my comment ("come back home to DK" was also more to suggest to put a "back" into the sentence: when I go back (home) to Denmark. Or maybe even "when I get back to Denmark"? I´m not trying to correct anyone here, I´m just making suggestions :-) (especially since my main working languages are Brazilian Portuguese and Danish)

Ah - I understand now. I don't think "going home" is any different from "going back home".