Vertimas - Kroatų-Anglų - poslije tebe mi ljubav dodje kao sirotinjama ...

Hi Comv,

This beginning sounds really weird, perhaps a comma after "after you" would make it clearer.
What sounds really awkward is that "love comes as poverty". Could you explain that in different words, please?

But that is the meaning of the word 'sirotinja'. It can be as poornes or something like that but i think that this sounds better.

Lili, Comv,

"kao sirotinjama"
"kao milostinja"

Look here!

Apparently those are disconnected lines That's why it doesn't make sense.

It should have been required as:

"poslije tebe mi ljubav dodje kao sirotinjama"

"Al' nema dana koliko je na srcu rana"

"after you love seems to me like alms"

"but there are not so many days as wounds on my heart"