Tercüme - Türkçe-İngilizce - üst kıyafet olarak yakalı gömlekler yer alacak....

merdogan,
I've made some edits here, could you tell me if they convey the meaning?

thanks
Can it be "hair fashion" as in original?

Yes, but in this case I'd turn the sentence from "bob can be suitable as hair style." into "bob may become (might be) the hair fashion".
What do you think?

thanks...