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Hi merdogan

I've added some commas and removed an extra "do" that slipped in here by accident

I've set a poll.

Bises
Tantine

I guess "that" is not actually necessary at the first sentence. And also it will sound better to say "from now on" instead of "anyway"

"...how many stars I have NOW?" and "I ALREADY have a sky." I think this way is better.

"From now on" is used in a totally different grammar case - it's continuing in the future. The original text has nothing to do with such a form.

Thanks

Do we really need to use "now"?

Каждый раз когда я думаю о тебе я рисую в своем сердце звезду. Знаешь сколько уже звезд в моем сердце? Целое небо.

я уже дала свой перевод данного текста.

There can be done a little fine-tuning

Без "that", и най-вероятно без "anyway"