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42Translation - Turkish-English - Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız...

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Title
Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız...
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Submitted by beyzanur_94_41
Source language: Turkish

Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız çiziyorum. Benim şimdi kaç yıldızım var biliyor musun? Benim artık bir gökyüzüm var.

Title
Stars on my heart
Translation
English

Translated by merdogan
Target language: English

Everytime that I think about you, I draw a star on my heart. Do you know how many stars I have?
I already have a skyful.
Last validated or edited by Tantine - 21 January 2009 19:34





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12 January 2009 19:04

Tantine
Number of messages: 2747
Hi merdogan

I've added some commas and removed an extra "do" that slipped in here by accident

I've set a poll.

Bises
Tantine

12 January 2009 19:15

cheesecake
Number of messages: 980
I guess "that" is not actually necessary at the first sentence. And also it will sound better to say "from now on" instead of "anyway"

12 January 2009 21:37

ViaLuminosa
Number of messages: 1116
"...how many stars I have NOW?" and "I ALREADY have a sky." I think this way is better.

"From now on" is used in a totally different grammar case - it's continuing in the future. The original text has nothing to do with such a form.


12 January 2009 22:17

cheesecake
Number of messages: 980
Thanks

12 January 2009 22:46

merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
Do we really need to use "now"?

16 January 2009 12:45

Barbariska
Number of messages: 30
Каждый раз когда я думаю о тебе я рисую в своем сердце звезду. Знаешь сколько уже звезд в моем сердце? Целое небо.

16 January 2009 15:11

Barbariska
Number of messages: 30
я уже дала свой перевод данного текста.

18 January 2009 18:30

boriva
Number of messages: 9
There can be done a little fine-tuning

18 January 2009 20:26

walker
Number of messages: 7
Без "that", и най-вероятно без "anyway"