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Translation - Turkish-English - Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız...
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Title
Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız...
Text
Submitted by
beyzanur_94_41
Source language: Turkish
Seni her düşündüğümde kalbime bir yıldız çiziyorum. Benim şimdi kaç yıldızım var biliyor musun? Benim artık bir gökyüzüm var.
Title
Stars on my heart
Translation
English
Translated by
merdogan
Target language: English
Everytime that I think about you, I draw a star on my heart. Do you know how many stars I have?
I already have a skyful.
Last validated or edited by
Tantine
- 21 January 2009 19:34
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12 January 2009 19:04
Tantine
Number of messages: 2747
Hi merdogan
I've added some commas and removed an extra "do" that slipped in here by accident
I've set a poll.
Bises
Tantine
12 January 2009 19:15
cheesecake
Number of messages: 980
I guess "that" is not actually necessary at the first sentence. And also it will sound better to say "from now on" instead of "anyway"
12 January 2009 21:37
ViaLuminosa
Number of messages: 1116
"...how many stars I have NOW?" and "I ALREADY have a sky." I think this way is better.
"From now on" is used in a totally different grammar case - it's continuing in the future. The original text has nothing to do with such a form.
12 January 2009 22:17
cheesecake
Number of messages: 980
Thanks
12 January 2009 22:46
merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
Do we really need to use "now"?
16 January 2009 12:45
Barbariska
Number of messages: 30
Каждый раз когда Ñ Ð´ÑƒÐ¼Ð°ÑŽ о тебе Ñ Ñ€Ð¸Ñую в Ñвоем Ñердце звезду. Знаешь Ñколько уже звезд в моем Ñердце? Целое небо.
16 January 2009 15:11
Barbariska
Number of messages: 30
Ñ ÑƒÐ¶Ðµ дала Ñвой перевод данного текÑта.
18 January 2009 18:30
boriva
Number of messages: 9
There can be done a little fine-tuning
18 January 2009 20:26
walker
Number of messages: 7
Без "that", и най-вероÑтно без "anyway"