תרגום - אנגלית-לטינית - You may hold my hand for a while ut you hold my...

I'm not sure about these adverbs of time you have used, dear.

temporis puncto = at the very moment
for a while = parumper

And why "ad perpetuum" (everlasting, permanent)?
Shouldn't be "in perpetuum" (forever)?

What do you think, Efee?

You're right for sure.