For a more transparent management of students' lack of discipline, Student Matters announced that the complaints regarding students' behaviour and the policy towards the different university units were necessary.
이 번역물에 관한 주의사항
most likely i mixed up a few parts. so any input is welcomed
lilian canale에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2008년 5월 20일 15:25
Kfeto, "...management of dealing with...."
this is a little heavy. It seems to me that "management" and "deal with" are used in the same way, so it sounds repetitive.
What about this?:
"For a more transparent management of the students' lack of discipline, ..."
or
"For more transparent dealings with the students' lack of discipline..."
And perhaps "a policy" instead of "the policy" if that conveys the original...
ok i edited.
its 'the' in turkish i think because litt it says "the policy which is to be implemented'
i awaiting reactions for not litt. translating that bit as it is;-)