Vertimas - Švedų-Ispanų - när du släpper mig med blicken faller hjärtat ihop

OK! Here we go - the actual meaning of the translation is way off...
The Swedish sentence is in English as follows:
"When your eyes let go of me my heart is falling apart"..!

Hi Mats Fondelius,

Could you please turn that into Spanish?

That's what we are checking here. The Spanish version of the text!

No problems Lilian..!

As it is now the whole "meaning" is lost...
To be correct the translation should be as follows:

"Cuando tus ojos dejar ir de mí mi corazón está desintegrando..."

Sincerly,

Mats Fondelius

I'm sorry Mats, but the sentence you formulated is completely wrong in Spanish, it doesn't make any sense.

Lilian , Mats intenta decir con "cuando tus ojos dejar ir de mí" algo así como "cuando dejas de mirarme".

Cuando apartas de mí tu mirada (dejas de mirarme), mi corazón se desintegra/desploma.

Thanks!

You got it spot on "pirulito"..!

T.C.

Mats