Prevođenje - Hindu-Engleski - Meri duniya mein tum aayeen

Could you please help me check this text?

Thanks.

CC: drkpp

Only the second line should be :

What all things you brought with you.

That would be weird.
Could it mean:

"You came into my world
carrying all/many/only good things
a body of silver, a heart of gold
and nights filled with dreams" ?



CC: drkpp

Yes. That is the intended meaning.

Previously I translated the sentence
literally word by word.

Thank you very much drkpp.

I think "carrying plenty of good things" will convey the meaning then and it will sound well in English. We keep the rhyme, too.

CC: drkpp