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Prevođenje - Engleski-Francuski - what eagle look still shows.

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Ovaj tekst je dostupan u sljedećim jezicima: EngleskiFrancuski

Kategorija Pjesništvo - Ljubav / Prijateljstvo

Ovaj zahtjev za prijevodom traži "Samo značenje".
Naslov
what eagle look still shows.
Tekst
Poslao Peuquat
Izvorni jezik: Engleski

When day begins to break
I count my good and bad,
Being wakeful for her sake,
Remembering what she had,
What eagle look still shows
Primjedbe o prijevodu
On attendrait une suite, mais il n'y en a pas...

Naslov
Ce que le regard d'un aigle montre toujours
Prevođenje
Francuski

Preveo gamine
Ciljni jezik: Francuski

Quand le jour commence à pointer
je compte ce que j'ai de bien et mal,
Restant éveillé par égard pour elle,
Me souvenant de ce qu'elle avait,
Ce que le regard d'un aigle montre toujours
Primjedbe o prijevodu
Traduction quelque peu libre mais elle est en MO. Je reste ouverte a toutes propositions de mes experts.
Posljednji potvrdio i uredio turkishmiss - 24 veljača 2009 13:24





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24 veljača 2009 11:06

Lein
Broj poruka: 3389
Daybreak = the beginning of the day.
My French is not good enough to be sure, but does your translation really mean the same?

24 veljača 2009 11:30

sagittarius
Broj poruka: 118
Hi! No, in French version the break of the day is the end of the day (evening).

24 veljača 2009 12:07

turkishmiss
Broj poruka: 2132
Hi Isatrap100,
What is your suggestion here

24 veljača 2009 12:28

turkishmiss
Broj poruka: 2132
It seems Lein is right I can find here daybreak means "aube" , and about to break it's also not so clear.
So I ask for an english expert Opinion.

Lilian,
Do you think it's the beginning or the end of the day.


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24 veljača 2009 12:30

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Yes girls, you are right, the text is referring to the dawn.

24 veljača 2009 12:38

gamine
Broj poruka: 4611
Thanks folks. You're right. "Quand la journée commence à se pointer".

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24 veljača 2009 12:40

turkishmiss
Broj poruka: 2132
Hi Gamine,
je crois que tu dois revoir ta traduction, je remets le compteur des votes à zéro en attendant.

24 veljača 2009 14:05

itsatrap100
Broj poruka: 279
Looks like it's all OK now.